dude, if this was your first attempt at making a trance track all i can say is…you are going to go far! dima is right about the sound being a bit old school but everything else was done extremely well. the vocals are great and i love the fx / echos you used. very well done. as for the groove, maybe beef up the bass a bit if you can. give it a bit heavier feel…other then that man this is a really great track.