sorry, hadn’t used that line in awhile. I agree with shelbs, needs more melody to the bassline since it takes presence in the track. Since you went with that type of bassline, man, I want to hear some HARD hitting drums. Throw in a amen break and work on the snare, drum chops. Get funky with the edits too.
Best advice to anyone new, listen to all the professional producers and listen to how they structure stuff. I’m still currently trying to get to the level of the guys I listen to and mix with.