Excellent! I love how you constructed it, nice progression!
The vocals are center, graphite, but the effect on them makes them hide in the mix… they’re back pretty deep and I detect he’s tweaked the spread on them to make them wider. Bring them forward into the mix! The only real issue is that they have some kind of modulation or EQ on the vox that strips away the lushness of her voice… and to be fair, it’s likely what had to be done in order to get something he could use for remix purposes.
Really great track!