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Do You Know The Love of the Father Remix


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  • #21402
    Avatar of graphite412
    graphite412
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    This is a close to being finished mix. I am really looking for suggestions. You guys listen to EDM way more than I do. This was basically my first shot at doing a real EDM mix so any suggestions will really help. I through some pluggins on it real quick to do a fakey mastering job. Does anything sound cheesy, crappy? Hopefully it will be finished this week depending on the time and the feedback that I get.

    God Bless everyone! :mrgreen:

    By the way this was a renoise project.

    #30843

    This is trance sounding mix, so I will let the trance heads to make comments, but it sounds fine to me, only a little outdated in terms of sounds and groove.

    #30844

    Rodimus
    Keymaster

    dude, if this was your first attempt at making a trance track all i can say is…you are going to go far! dima is right about the sound being a bit old school but everything else was done extremely well. the vocals are great and i love the fx / echos you used. very well done. as for the groove, maybe beef up the bass a bit if you can. give it a bit heavier feel…other then that man this is a really great track.

    i can’t wait to hear the final production. :D

    #30845
    Avatar of graphite412
    graphite412
    Participant

    I updated the files above as of 10-21-09 at 11:15am. I got rid of the stupid amount of high end, improved some transitions, and gated the synths on the second round of verses. Let me know what you guys think. :)

    #30846

    Hey Graphite412,

    Nice track. I wanted to give you some constructive feedback on it. I like the beginning and how it builds up into the 1st verse and then into the chorus. I think one of the things I didn’t like about the track is how the vocals of the song kept going without a logic break. This might be improved by putting in a small 16 bar instrumental break at around 2:28 and then going on with the 2nd verse. The breakdown at 3:46 is really nice! I think thought I liked the first version breakdown better. I think the snare comes in too quick on the revised version…..but then I like this new trance part that comes in here. This part could have benefited by coming in sooner in the song. I feel it goes on a little too much for my taste before the vocals come in again. And then again maybe a break after the 1st chorus if that’s possible. The ending of the song was a little weak not taking out elements one by one until all you are left with is the kick and snare and a hat or something. That would make it more DJ friendly of course for mixing into the next track. So thoughts are my thoughts.

    I like the overall quality of the production. Decent mixing.

    Hope that helps.

    #30847
    Avatar of graphite412
    graphite412
    Participant

    Thanks man for the advice. I’ll definitely probably use some of the advice.

    #30848
    Avatar of graphite412
    graphite412
    Participant

    maybe beef up the bass a bit if you can

    Rodimus by bass did you mean the instrument or the low end in general?

    #30849
    Avatar of graphite412
    graphite412
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    Final Track at this link

    viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1673

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