I like how you ripped off the red lettering on the black background
Sounding good. I think it could have used a couple other things in the mix to keep it sounding more fresh, maybe more changes to the basic beat. The kick could also have had a little more presence, but if that is a loop, then you wouldn’t be able to work with it a whole lot by itself. Sounds awesome for a first attempt.
were you using a sub bass with that wobble bass? There is a lack of the real deep bass for example that is on the deadmau5- I remember dubstep remix.
I know you don’t have monitors that go any where down that low but could you play your track on a church pa? This could help in figuring out the low end. Fortunately for me, I have a pa in my room, so I can check the very low end at my house.